Total Toonie Island

While my other FF is still in the process, I thought I'd start up another one until something comes to mind.

Challenge ideas for this FF will be appreciated! Please PM me the challenge. (Remember, they're all at Camp Wawanakwa for the setting, not the TDWT setting.)
This is my first time doing something like this. After I get feedback for the prolouge below, please tell me what it is. It may tell me whether yes or no I may continue this story.

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Chris: Welcome to the first season of Total Toonie Island! I'm Chris McLean, hosting the brand-new hottest show on television down at Camp Wawanakwa, somewhere in Muskoka, Ontario! Now, let's get down to business. As you see your favorite cartoon characters competing against each other, they'll also be participating in the most sickest, torturing, diabolical challenges ever! Then, at the end of the day, the contestants will be voting off one another whoever they want kicked off the island. The ones who remain safe, will earn a tasty marshmallow treat. And so the contestant eliminated as such will have to walk the D.O.S. or, Dock of Shame and take the Boat of Losers back home. You may be excited to have me tell you what the last competitor standing wins. And I'll tell right now. That person will win... $100,000! Who will be the winner? Who will be the losers? Find out right now on this first episode of Total... Toonie... Island!

Looks like it has potitenal. I wanna see the first chapter first.

Chapter 1: Meet the Campers


Chris: And now we're back to Total Toonie Island, where we meet all the 12 contestants, Mordecai, Rigby, Skips, Pops, Benson, Annie, Manderz, Coco, Margaret, Don, Muscle Man, and High Five Ghost. Hey, guys. Welcome!

Mordecai: Um... hey.

Rigby: Yeah, yeah, hello.

Mordecai: Chris, dude, this place doesn't look like the one on the brochure. Did you trick us?!

Rigby: Seriously, you're messed up. -.-

Chris: *snickers to himself* I know. It's that funny! We do it to boost ratings, and look at their priceless expressions!

Mordecai: [seriousness] You make me sick...

Chris: Yeah, yeah. Okay, whatever.

Rigby: *to himself* JERK.

Benson: So Chris, this is the island, huh?

Chris: Yup, Benson, it sure is.

Benson: Great. Now I'm stuck with these two idiots for a whole summer, and I won't get any peace and quiet.

Chris: Who, Mordecai and Rigby?

Benson: Yeah! They always like to annoy me.

Chris: Hm... I don't know. They seem interesting.

[Benson rolled his eyes then walked away]

Benson: *scoff* Some people.

Margaret: Psst, Annie. Do you think this'll be fun? Competing against each other?

Annie: I don't know. Maybe. But I guess we have to if we're all in it for the mill.

Manderz: This is gonna be awesome! We're gonna be great friends! *hugs Margaret and Annie*

Annie: *chuckle* Manderz, we're already friends. XD

Manderz: *lets go* Oh, right. Hehe! Coco, this is gonna be fun, right?

Coco: Yep, I'm gonna win it!

Benson: Don't get your hopes up, pal. I'm gonna win that cash.

Pops: I need that money to pay off the park's taxes.

Don: Didn't I pay them already?

Pops: Oh...yeah. I think so.

Don: -.- Er... right. Rig Bone! How about some sugar, eh?

Rigby: NO WAY.

Don: *sigh* Whatever.

Skips: I hope this host guy isn't as harsh like in the other seasons.

Muscle Man: Chris-meister, when are we gonna get this party started?

Chris: Just about now! Everyone, go near the bonfire setup and I'll tell you who your teammates are.

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Still needs more plot, although the opening is nice. I like it.

I may have to post the next chapter soon, I'm kinda busy with school right now and stuff.

... well the edits add opening. Wow is suprizing bad you know me, or is that part of the plot.

It's part of the plot.


[Everyone was at the bonfire setup, where all the contestants were sitting on the logs around the bonfire, waiting for Chris to announce the teams and such]

Chris: Ok, everyone. I'm putting you guys into teams. No matter how much you hate being on the same team or you like it, there will be NO SWAPS. These teams are permanent.

[There were dissapointed groans, moans, and complaints from the contestants off-screen as Chris is smiling]

Chris: Yes. I'm that good. This isn't kindergarten where you choose your partner or something. *snicker* All right. As I call your name, stand here.

Benson: "Please, please, PLEASE don't put me on the same team as Mordecai and Rigby." *crosses fingers*

Chris: Annie...Manderz...Margaret...Mordecai...Rigby...and, Benson!

Benson: "Crap."

Chris: Now for the second team, you guys go here. Coco...Pops...Skips...Don...Muscle Man... and, High Five Ghost! You guys have 5 minutes to come up with a team name, then you guys will meet me at Mess Hall for your challenge of the day.

Annie, Margaret, Manderz, Mordecai, Rigby, and Benson: The Killer Sharks!

Coco, Pops, Skips, Don, Muscle Man, and HFG: The Screaming Gophers!

Chris: Nice, now you guys also have 5 minutes to get to Mess Hall. Better run!

[All the contestants ran by Chris and they were off]

Meanwhile in Mess Hall, Chef was preparing lunch for everyone. They were all in different places, talking with one another, waiting to get their meal. After that, Chris will announce what the challenge is for the day]

Chef: ALL RIGHT, YA MAGGOTS. I serve you meals three times a day. You EAT three times a day, and YOU WILL LIKE IT THREE TIMES A day, no matter how much you like or hate my cooking. I at least need appreciation, and you can show it by eating my food. So-

Annie: Um, I hate to be a bother on the first day, but I think all of us know the "three times a day" phrase, in which it is breakfast, lunch, and dinner. You don't need to-

Chef: I KNOW WHAT I'M SAYIN', GIRL. Just shut up and listen!

Annie: >.>

Chef: As I was saying, you will eat my cooking. And LIKE IT. So line up and get your meal.

[Everyone quickly got settled and lined up rapidly, holding trays. As they recieved their meal, they went and sat down at the tables. On the tray, it had sloppy, disgusting-y type of ingredients in it that made most people hurl. The food seems to be squirming a little]

--Table 1--
Annie, Mordecai, Rigby, Manderz, Pops, and Skips

--Table 2--
Benson, High Five Ghost, Muscle Man, Don, Coco, and Margaret

[Meanwhile at table 1...]

Manderz: *snickering* Annie, that was win. You were hilarious when you intterupted Chef that way.

Annie: Eh, it's no big deal. Everyone should know what that means.

Manderz: Yeah, but still. You made me lol inside.

Annie: *notices tray food moving* Um... I don't know if this is just me, but I think my meal just moved.

Mordecai: Whoa, seriously? That's gross. *gags* I suddenly don't have the appetite to want to eat anymore.

Rigby: Ugh, so far this camp is SUCKING.

Annie: Yeah, you can say that again.

[Meanwhile at table 2...]

Benson: So guys, have any idea with what the challenge might be today? What do you think they'll make us do?

Margaret: Well, it's our first challenge. After all, I don't think it'll be that bad. How hard could it be?

Nice start I wonder what will happen.

Thanks. Another part is coming soon.

I think it's cute that TRS and TDI are combined in your story(:

Keep it coming!

*wonders if Margaret and Benson will fall in looooooooove*